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About Me Member Deviously Deviant StarshiniwulfFemale/Unknown Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Months
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Thu Jul 30, 2009, 5:52 PM
Scanner is broke...i have a few new things...but i dont like pictures so ill try to fix it...that or sneak into my older brothers room and use his haha...Lets go with plan B!

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:iconstereo-typed:
I looked at your poems. They're all fantastic! I',m especially fond of the nature one, but, if I may make a suggestion? When describing nature in poems and such, try adding colors and specific little critters. It may make the mental image pop out more in the readers mind and it could add beauty to the poem itself. :D

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Sometimes you make me feel :raincloud:, and other times you make me feel :floating:. Sometimes you make my heart feel :onfire:, and other times you make my heart feel :dead:. Are you a :heartbreaker: or a :love:? I can't tell anymore.
:iconstarshiniwulf:
thanks! I loved the Nature ones ;) thats for the constructive critism though im fairly new to writing.
:iconstereo-typed:
New? Really? Wow. Didn't sound like beginner to me. Well, if you are new like you say you are, and one only has room to improve, I expect PUBLISHED pieces, my friend! :shakefish:

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Sometimes you make me feel :raincloud:, and other times you make me feel :floating:. Sometimes you make my heart feel :onfire:, and other times you make my heart feel :dead:. Are you a :heartbreaker: or a :love:? I can't tell anymore.
:iconstarshiniwulf:
Yeah new xD I only started about...halfway through the school year...around December or January...It started with a school project haha....and wow Published??
:iconstereo-typed:
Yus! :D

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Sometimes you make me feel :raincloud:, and other times you make me feel :floating:. Sometimes you make my heart feel :onfire:, and other times you make my heart feel :dead:. Are you a :heartbreaker: or a :love:? I can't tell anymore.
:iconleonardoxlaura-fan:
Hey! Thanks for the fave on [link] !!

I'll read some of your stuff in return, something over there caught my eye....

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'Jo~sho RikkaiDai!Let's go, let's go, RikkaiDai!' >8D
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"I'm WATCHING YOU!! So WATCH IT!!...OMG, pun o-o"-Me

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